In the last years, young drivers are involved in accidents. Those road accidents have many causes but amongst young people the major reasons are the innocence, the imprudence and the alcohol influence. For instance, a youth celebrated his 18 th birthday in a club, he drank a lot of alcohol and he drove home in his own car. 15 minutes later, an accident occured, two were badly injured and one died - the birthday boy.
An organization of accident victims has recently proposed that the age for getting a driver's license should be raised to 19. In my opinion, this suggestion is unfair. There are many youngsters that are conscious of the danger in the road and they are more cautious than the others. Moreover, there are youngsters whose aim in life is to live, and live a good life without any unnecessary risk, accordingly they should get a driver's license early and not at the age of 19.
There are other possibilities to reduce the road accidents amongst youngsters. First, the government has to reinforce the security amongst the popular clubs and(what?).Besides this(phr.), the educational system has to prepare for the youngsters many lectures and activities, that will demonstrate better the danger in(ww.) the road so youngsters will take into account their movement(ww.) in(ww.) the road.
An organization of accident victims has recently proposed that the age for getting a driver's license should be raised to 19. In my opinion, this suggestion is unfair. There are many youngsters that are conscious of the danger in the road and they are more cautious than the others. Moreover, there are youngsters whose aim in life is to live, and live a good life without any unnecessary risk, accordingly they should get a driver's license early and not at the age of 19.
There are other possibilities to reduce the road accidents amongst youngsters. First, the government has to reinforce the security amongst the popular clubs and(what?).Besides this(phr.), the educational system has to prepare for the youngsters many lectures and activities, that will demonstrate better the danger in(ww.) the road so youngsters will take into account their movement(ww.) in(ww.) the road.
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To sum up, this suggestion may have a good intention(phr.) but it is unfair and it prevents the freedom of movement from the youngsters. In my opinion, the government can find better and more effective solutions to this common problem.
Much better. Well done.
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Daphna
